Long Chapters Or Short Chapters - What Is Your Preference?

Does it make a difference to a reader whether the chapters in a book are long or short? It does to me. I like shorter chapters, as they feed into my penchant for reading a chapter or two before sleeping at night. Ideally, a chapter will take an idea or an action and work through it to a logical stopping point. 

The length of the chapter needs to fit the pace of the story. If the chapters are too short, the book may end up feeling choppy - too many stops and starts. If the chapters are too long, the reader may get bogged down with too much information. 

Short chapters can be used to insert needed information or to add a sense of urgency. I have read chapters that were a page and a half long but added something necessary to that stage of the story. Longer chapters can be used to detail specific events or time periods.

Each chapter should have its own arc. Looking at word count, shorter chapters could run around 1,500 to 2,000 words, whereas longer chapters may run closer to 3,500 to 4,000 words. Do what feels natural for the flow of your story. Word count is only a mechanism used to keep track of your story. Let the words flow as they will. 

Combining short and long chapters is a good way to keep your readers' attention and keep them interested in and excited about your story.

If you are having a hard time deciding what chapter length best serves your story, go with your gut. What feels right to you? What feels right for your story? Take a look at authors that you admire in your genre. How do they structure the length of their chapters?

The editing stage for all writers is where they see what works with their book and what doesn't. This also applies to chapter length. This is where you see what needs to be added, where it needs to be added, and what needs to be taken out. 

Happy writing!

December 2023 Bonnie Cehovet

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The Four Pillars of Book Marketing

 

The idea behind the four pillars of book marketing comes from an article I read on Jane Friedman's site The Four Pillars Of Book Marketing. The article was written by guest author Matt Holmes. I saw myself in this article in so many ways! I am still on the very steep learning curve of marketing my books, it has not been that long ago that I looked at all of the options (Facebook, Amazon, YouTube, Twitter, Instagram) and did not know where to begin. (If you read Matt Holmes's article, you will see that he also branches out into promo sites, Facebook groups, newspapers and magazines as part of his initial promotional blitz.)

He currently uses two sources to promote his wife's books - Facebook ads and Amazon ads. I can live with that! (He also does a "small spend" on BookBub.)

Holmes identifies the four pillars of book marketing as:

• Book Product Page
• Traffic
• Audience building
• Profit

He goes on to break down each pillar and describe each one and how it works. I won't go into that here, because you need to read his words and story. This is a must-read article if you want to get a handle on promoting your books.

His suggestion is to do 30 to 60 minutes of marketing a day. To hear that was a great relief! You market, and then you track your marketing. I can do that! (Hint - he actually gives you the steps he takes in a 60-minute marketing session,)

There is more, but I will leave that for you to read. This one article shows the way to make marketing relatively simple and easy.

(c) October 2023 Bonnie Cehovet

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Taking Your Characters From One Book To A Series

Writing a series is not as easy as it sounds. I have my first cozy mystery up on Kindle Vella and Kindle e-books (I still need to set up the print version). It is titled Annie's Antiques and can be found here (Kindle Vella) and here (Kindle e-book). One down, five to go! 

The first book in the series places a relatively heavy focus on characters that will not be included in the series. It is based on action that takes place in the present but is based on the WWII era. The next book will be based in the protagonist's hometown of Fairfax, Virginia, and will build a solid foundation for the books to come. 

As an aside, while I tried to make each chapter (other than chapter one, which is free to read) 5,000 words, I was finding that a bit difficult to do, and I wasn't posting as often as I should have been. My next Kindle Vella books will be 1,000 words for the first (free) chapter and 2,500 words for each remaining chapter. As with my first book, it will go from Kindle Vella, then when it is finished to Kindle e-books and a print book.

I started out my journey on how to develop characters for a series on ChatGPT, which is a well-known AI app. One that I have had very good luck using for research purposes. I asked it how to develop characters from a single book into a series. Its first comment was that integrating characters from one book into a series was a great way to build continuity and a loyal readership. Then it gave me the following tips:

• Be sure to develop multi-dimensional characters.
• Plan character arcs (how each character's story evolves over the course of the series.
• Maintain consistency with characters' personalities, traits, and backstory details.
• Use character backstories to deepen their development.
• Create subplots using characters from the first book.
• Introduce new challenges and mysteries.
• Showcase character growth.
• Incorporate references to past events. Balance old and new characters,
• Listen to readers feedback and reviews.

I found some interesting information when I was researching a photo to use with this blog: there are guides out there on creating a Kindle book series page on Amazon; turning book ideas into multiple books; that there are different types of book series; how to create a book series bundle and box set and more!

One step at a time. Starting on my second book in the Annie's Antiques series this weekend!

(c) October 2023 Bonnie Cehovet

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How Is Your Author Website Doing?

 

One of the most important aspects of author branding is having a website that works for us. I have stumbled through this for many years, fine-tuning my website (bonniecehovet-author.com) so that it represents who I am and what my work is all about. It will never have a highly professional look to it because I want my readers to feel that they are sitting with me at my kitchen table, having coffee (or tea),  eating homemade cookies, and discussing life. 

What do you want your website to say to your readers? How can you keep your readers coming back? What is important to you, and what is important to them? 

Whether we are setting up a new website or fine-tuning an existing one, there are some mistakes that are often made that we want to avoid.

You need to decide what you want your website to do for you and how you want to do it. You want to present yourself as a credible author, and you want to draw a readership that is specific to your work. Along with presenting your books, you will want to talk about speaking engagements, courses you have created, or new books that are in the pipeline. You want to retain your reader's interest!

You also want to watch that you don't become too enamored of your own words. Keep the word count down - remember, people have a tendency to skim through websites - say something with brevity that means something and will hold their interest.

Make sure that your site is mobile-ready - IOW, that someone can bring it up on their phone. 

Make sure that your site is easy to navigate. Too many options will lose the interest of potential readers.

You don't have a newsletter? Go set one up right now! And place the signup where it is easily seen on your website.

How about a blog? Yes, you need a blog to reach out to your readers with important information (or just to keep them updated on your progress). Your blog can be part of your website, or it can be separate (as mine is).

Finally (and here is where I drop the ball) keep your website updated.

Here are some author websites that I find to be well done:

Laurie R. King

Joanne Fluke

Coffee House Mystery

Rita Mae Brown

(c) September 2023 Bonnie Cehovet

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The Reality of Writer's Block

 

I don't know any writer that has not experienced writer's block. We all deal with it from time to time. What causes it? It is not necessarily just because you are not clear on where you want your writing to go. We can experience writer's block due to the following:

• Having a bad hair day.
• Stress in other parts of our life affecting our ability to concentrate.
• Being not happy with what we have already written.
• Being not clear on where our work is headed.
• Being physically or mentally tired.
• Knowing where we want to go with our writing but being unsure of how to get there.
• Lack of self-confidence.
• Not feeling motivated.

What we do not want to do is lose ourselves in negative self-talk.

• I don't have time to write - I have too many other responsibilities.
• My writing isn't selling - maybe I am not a good writer.
• My last book had reasonable sales - can I repeat that, or was it a fluke?
• I have too many distractions. (Here, we need to fess up to allowing those distractions to go on,)

How can we get ourselves unblocked?

• Take a break - walk away from our writing.
• Work on another project for a while, then come back to the one we were blocked on.
• Make some notes about why you are stuck.
• Move on to the next chapter. You can come back to this part of your work later with fresh eyes,
• Talk to your characters - all of them. Have a round-table discussion about how they feel about your writing, their characters, and the plot. Take their input seriously!
• Come up with more than one ending, and see where your characters want to take it. 

When our writing flows, it flows. My feeling is that my characters are using me as a mechanism to get their thoughts and actions on paper (e-paper, in my case.) They all work well together - I just write it all down!

(c) May 2023 Bonnie Cehovet

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The Chicago GuideToCopyediting Fiction

What attracted me to this book was the phrase "The Chicago Guide To." I wondered if it was any relation to The Chicago Manual of Style, which I have had as a resource for more years than I can count. It turns out that, yes, it is related. Where the Chicago Manual of Style is used primarily for non-fiction work, The Chicago Guide To Copyediting Fiction is geared towards copyediting fiction work. My primary work is in the genre of cozy mysteries, so this book is ideal for me. Yes, I copyedit my own work, and I self-publish through Kindle Vella, Kindle Direct, and Create Space. The publisher for both books is the same - The University of Chicago Press.

Part I of this book is an overview of a fiction copyeditor's approach to a manuscript. Part II covers building a fiction style sheet, Part III covers grammar and usage, working with dialogue,  and blending fact and fiction. (As fiction writers, we know that our stories are based on the real world, on fact, but whatever happens in that real world is fiction.) Appendix A covers style sheet templates, Appendix B covers file management, and Appendix C covers the use of multiple monitors. There is also a glossary of terms, a list of recommended resources, and an index.

This book is pure joy to use! I loved the use of sidebars to address specific information. There is an interesting note on Publisher House Styles - IOW, publishing houses that may have their own internal style format. There are also references given for Australian English, British English, and Canadian English. Then we come to organizing character lists (I cannot tell you how many times I have had to search back through a manuscript to find out something simple, like a character's last name or occupation!)   

There are so many things to keep track of that as authors we don't really think about. I am going to have to go back through my WIP and list the people involved, who knows who, significant events, and settings. I will do this not only to make sure everything tracks okay in this book, but I plan to do five more books in this series, and I don't want my readers to spot discrepancies and think they are looking at shoddy writing, that I have not done my due diligence.

As writers, we do need to take care when referencing real people and real events. And we need to make a visible line between fact and fiction in our books. We also have to be careful with things like trademarks, permissions, and quotes. So much to think about!

A lot of the material in this book will not apply to someone like me who is self-publishing, but what did apply to me was gold. This book will sit on the shelf to the left of my desk, right next to The Chicago Manual of Style. 

(c) April 2023 Bonnie Cehovet

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AI And Dream Inerpretation

What is dream interpretation? It can be viewed as assigning meaning to the imagery and symbols within our dreams. Dreams can be a way for spirit to bring messages to us. They can be a portent of things to come and/or things to watch out for. They can be a way of addressing stress in our daily lives or addressing shadow issues that we do not feel comfortable dealing with. Dreams play an important part in our lives and need to be acknowledged and respected. 

The world of Artificial Intelligence (AI) has now found its way into dream interpretation. What AI does is gather intelligence (facts) and turn them into algorithms that help us analyze the patterns and symbols found in our dreams. In essence, we are looking into our own unconscious mind, the mind that created the dream in the first place. 

The app that came to my attention was dreaminterpreter.ai, an app that interprets dreams but also has what is called Dreamer Map, where users can share their dreams with the community and get feedback from other users.

I put into the app a dream that I had some time ago of my mother and I in a speeding convertible with the top down. She was driving. (In real life, we would not have been in a convertible with the top down, and we would not have been speeding.) We were coming up to a curve that I knew we were not going to be able to navigate. We flew off the curve, out into space, towards the ocean. We did not go nose down, we floated down horizontally in a peaceful manner. I woke up before we hit the water.

I had already interpreted this dream as it was very straightforward. The interpretation that the app gave me was spot on.

It is easily seen how this tool can help individuals in their daily lives, but how would we use this tool as writers? We can use it to present flashbacks, we can use it as warnings for the future, we can have our characters entering into conversations with those that have crossed over, and we can have the solution/resolution to an issue present itself in a dream. 

We can create a dream with one AI app (such as ChapGPT) and have it interpreted by another AI app (such as interpretation.ai).

AI is here to stay - we simply need to discover how to use it and what part we want it to play in our lives.

(c) March 2023 Bonnie Cehovet

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AI Writing Tools Gone Rogue

Artificial Intelligence (AI) can be defined as the simulation of the process of human intelligence by machines. For our purposes as writers, we would be working with areas such as speech recognition and language processing. Current applications in these areas include ChatGPT, AI Writer, Writecream, and CopyAI. 

AI works by taking in large amounts of data, analyzing it for patterns, and using these patterns to make predictions. Chatbots are fed examples of text chats that enable them to produce realistic exchanges with people. (A prime example of this is ChatGPT. Another example that we all encounter is Chatbots that are used for responding to questions on a number of sites. If they cannot answer your questions, they may bring on a live Customer Service Representative or refer you to an e-mail address or phone number.)

There have been recent instances of AI bots going rogue. By that, I mean they gave inappropriate responses or took on aggressive personality traits. The prime example here would be Microsoft's Bing search engine. One reporter trying out the Bing AI was told that he was not happily married. Please note: the reporter pushed the chatbot by asking it to describe the darkest desires of its "shadow self."

The AI app Lee-Luda (by the South Korean company Scatterlab), in the form of a 20-year-old friendly female (released in December of 2020, began using verbally abusive language referencing LGBTQ+, people with disabilities, and feminists. This led to it being removed from Facebook Messenger 20 days after its launch.

In March 2016, Microsoft introduced the bot Tay, which was supposed to be an experiment in "conversational understanding." The more chats the bot engaged in, the smarter it became. What happened is that it started posting inflammatory Tweets and had to be removed from Twitter. 

In December 2016, Microsoft released a chatbot named Zo (a successor to Tay). It was available on Facebook Messenger, GroupMe, and Twitter. Zo was known to give inappropriate responses and was taken down in April 2019.  

To balance this out, I would also like to mention Apple's Siri, Amazon'z Alexa, and Google Assistant. These are all conversational bots that perform in very positive ways.

Why do AI's go rogue? It's the little things, like lack of human supervision, incomplete or biased data, and poorly designed algorithms. All of which can be overcome with a little bit of thought.

Some individuals, such as Elon Musk, founder of OpenAI, are promoting AI regulation and safety. What we can do to help prevent AI from going rogue is to implement ethical guidelines and ensure adequate human oversight and control. 

How do AI's help us with our writing? They help us improve our grammar, writing, and style. They can help us research given topics, and they can give us outlines for whatever we want to write. They are a fantastic time saver.

Keep in mind that AI stands for Artificial Intelligence. The AI apps function in conversation mode so that the user feels comfortable with them. It is like having a conversation with another human being. You will get back what you put into a conversation with an AI app. I "talk" with ChatGPT on a regular basis. I am extremely polite and try to be as specific as possible. In return, the app is also extremely polite, and its responses are exactly what I am looking for. 

They are not always right. We can get bad or skewed information from them. If what you are asking the app is extremely important to the work that you are doing, I would advise confirming it elsewhere. Treat the chatbot well, and it will treat you well.

References:

https://www.dailymail.co.uk/news/article-11761271/Rogue-artificial-intelligence-chatbot-declares-love-user-tells-leave-wife.htm

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Zo_(bot)

https://blog.cfte.education/conversational-ai-examples-how-siri-alexa-google-assistant-have-human-like-conversations/#:~:text=Yes!,with%20answers%20to%20certain%20questions.

https://www.forbes.com/sites/qai/2023/02/16/elon-musk-has-issued-a-stark-warning-over-ai-this-isnt-his-first-time/?sh=107ea1f26509

(c) February 2023 Bonnie Cehovet

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How Writers Can Make Best Use Of ChatGPT

 

ChatGPT (Chat Generative Pre-trained Transformer) is a chat box launched by Open AI in November of 2022. It came to my attention pretty much at the same time from two sources: a LinkedIn gentleman that I follow (S. Vincent Shin) and the founder of a course that I was taking related to writing (Ty Cohen).

It is known for its detailed, articulate responses, but also has a significant drawback - it has uneven factual accuracy. I just started using it and found it easy and fun to use. I asked for a title for this specific blog and was given a very nice one that I adapted for use. It also provided me with an outline for this blog, which I did decide to use. (I can ramble on a bit on my own!)

I plan to continue using the program to give shape and focus to whatever I am writing. It will not write the article/story/book for you, but it will give you a solid outline that takes your own thoughts/ideas and brings them to life. This would be very helpful if you were in a place in your writing where you were either stuck or simply lost.

The bot mimics human conversation, which makes it easy to follow. It also has the ability to sort out what is factual and what is not factual about the questions it is being asked.

As the responses from the bot are known not to be 100% accurate, I would advise using it as a starting point and doing your due diligence to verify the information you are being given.

ChatGPT is free to users. I understand that there is also a paid version, which gives users priority during times of heavy usage, as well as access to new features. The app is not currently available for use on iPhone or IOS.

(c) February 2023 Bonnie Cehovet

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Self-Editing For Fiction Writers - How to edit yourself into print

I don't mind editing my own work, but what I am finding is that I miss things. I know that when I am reading a poorly edited book, whether fiction or non-fiction, it loses credence. I write mainly fiction - cozy mysteries, to be precise. I want my readers to enjoy my books and look forward to my next book. I don't want them to be so turned off by poor editing that I slip into never-never land in their eyes.  

I just picked up the second edition of Renni Browne and Dave King's "Self-Editing for Fiction Writers - How to edit yourself into print." Topics covered include characterization and exposition, POV (point of view), dialogue mechanics, sophistication, and voice.

Their first words of advice are to put your manuscript down for a while before you edit it. In this way, you are looking at it with fresh eyes. I have ignored this advice from time to time and generally found myself in a terrible mess and tearing my hair out.  

From presenting examples of the best way to present a paragraph, using scenes to tell your story, to doing the writing exercises presented in this book - these are all wonderful ways to interact with what the authors are teaching.

It is important to establish our characters, and the authors do a good job of showing the best ways to do this. I like their use of checklists in each chapter - they make the editing/tightening-up process much easier.

Write your story - then go back in and make it better!

I find this book to be a good resource for editing. I know I will do a much better job editing my books if I heed what they say. The bottom line of editing is that it is in this process that we, as authors, are able to polish our work so that it stands out and continues to attract readers.

(c) January 2023 Bonnie Cehovet

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Amazon Shorts

What exactly are Amazon shorts? They are short Kindle (e-book) reads, defined by page length: 15 minutes (1-11 pages), 30 minutes (12-21 pages), 45 minutes (22-32 pages), 90 minutes (44-64 pages), one hour (33-43 pages), and two hours, or more (65-100 pages). They cover all genres, which makes me happy. 

I have a game plan - I am going to submit Kindle shorts in non-fiction categories - self-help, Tarot, self-care, conscious thinking - topics that I want to write about (and get paid for) while at the same time creating a residual income. I am aiming for the 22-32 and 44-64 page lengths. At the minimum, I can do one a week and see where they go.

If you want to join me, you might want to check out this site: short reads and short stories. Advance warning - this is a promotion for a paid-for program that addresses genres, themes, markets, and price levels. It is relatively inexpensive, so I did purchase it. I have not used it yet so I am not recommending it - I am just putting it out there as an option.

What we are offering our readers are stories that they can read in one setting. If they like one story, the chances are they will go on to buy more. I am still going to write a series of full-length books, but I would like to use the shorts as another stream of income. 

 

Here is a link to an article on Medium entitled How To Make Money Writing Short Books On Amazon

Here is a link to a YouTube video on Kindle Shorts - How To Short Books On Amazon

(c) Bonnie Cehovet

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Into The New Year With Ty Cohen

 

Ty Cohen - this is a name that you want to remember. If you want to make a consistent passive income from your writing - seek out Ty Cohen. If you want to know how to get the best results on Amazon - search out Ty Cohen. If you want to know how to promote your books on Amazon - search out Ty Cohen.

A few months ago Ty Cohen's Kindle Cash Flow program found its way into my radar. I ended up purchasing the program as well as his program on advertising on Amazon. These are obviously paid-for programs, but I felt the investment was well worth it, because it was an investment in myself and my future.

Ty Cohen is a very well-spoken individual who addresses his programs to both authors and non-authors. (Yes, he does show step-by-step how to get a freelance writer to write your books for you. This is basically aimed at the Kindle Shorts program.)

I am going to start with the Amazon advertising program, then move on to the Kindle Cash Flow program. I will let you all know how this works for me. And that is the operative phrase - "how it works for me", because how a program works is dependent on an individual's understanding of the program and how to implement it.

You can visit Ty Cohen's site and see what programs he has to offer: Ty Cohen.

You can see his You Tube videos here: Ty Cohen.

Wishing you all a stellar 2023!

(c) January 2023 Bonnie Cehovet

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